The Walking Metaphor
author’s note:
Based on an actual event.
THE WALKING METAPHOR
Sometimes a metaphor stuns me.
Like the one I saw this morning:
a woman walking
backwards
on the sidewalk by the park.
Soon
the trees hid her from view
and I recovered enough
to decipher my response:
I can see the past--
I can see I’m on a path
but
I can’t see for certain
where I’m stepping.
With that realization
I remembered
a dream from the night before:
I saw the tracks I’d made
as well as the tracks
I would make
shining on a dirt track.
That dream told me:
you must learn to trust your deep luminous eye.
That woman in the park
steps with confidence
--why?--
because she trusts
her deep luminous eye.
I can see her now
and feel inspired.
However
when someone walks backwards
you naturally worry they’ll fall.
I suppose I could pray
for her safe passage
but wouldn’t that show a lack of faith
in her inner strength--
in her spirit?
But I can still pray--
I will pray a way that honors her:
every day
in my heart I will thank her
for being
a walking metaphor
for all to witness.
Common Courage: poetry book
myth steps blog
dream steps blog
you tube channel
© 2023, Michael R. Patton
Based on an actual event.
THE WALKING METAPHOR
Sometimes a metaphor stuns me.
Like the one I saw this morning:
a woman walking
backwards
on the sidewalk by the park.
Soon
the trees hid her from view
and I recovered enough
to decipher my response:
I can see the past--
I can see I’m on a path
but
I can’t see for certain
where I’m stepping.
With that realization
I remembered
a dream from the night before:
I saw the tracks I’d made
as well as the tracks
I would make
shining on a dirt track.
That dream told me:
you must learn to trust your deep luminous eye.
That woman in the park
steps with confidence
--why?--
because she trusts
her deep luminous eye.
I can see her now
and feel inspired.
However
when someone walks backwards
you naturally worry they’ll fall.
I suppose I could pray
for her safe passage
but wouldn’t that show a lack of faith
in her inner strength--
in her spirit?
But I can still pray--
I will pray a way that honors her:
every day
in my heart I will thank her
for being
a walking metaphor
for all to witness.
Common Courage: poetry book
myth steps blog
dream steps blog
you tube channel
© 2023, Michael R. Patton
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