Crow Cry Moonrise
One night as a child, I saw the moon following our pickup truck.
Then I decided: probably follows everyone around.
CROW CRY MOONRISE
Here’s a fable I wrote recently
for you to enjoy and ponder:
The cry of a crow came
at the moment the tip
of a gold moon appeared
across the desert on the eastern horizon.
So the moon believed
it’d caused the bird to cry.
And the bird was sure
it’d caused the moon to rise.
Obviously in the poem
the crow and the moon are both fools.
But maybe the bigger fool
is the one who wrote them both into being—
reading those verses again, I suddenly saw:
I did not understand
the motivations of my own characters—
why did that bird cry?
And why does the moon
still want to rise
when to rise means
you’ll hear all the cries?
After careful analysis, I realized:
the crow had called out because
I’d squelched that cry in my heart.
And the Harvest Moon rose
because one day I hope to rise
and shine a bit of light
to help those who travel through
long nights of grievous confusion.
Okay
but what about the writer?—
maybe he was trying to impress you—
using humor to state a universal truth.
Well yes, but
after careful analysis, I now realize:
I hid my pain and my hope
under that joke.
But though I feel embarrassed now
I’ve decided to publish those lines anyway
because:
Maybe when they hear that crow
some will begin to feel
the cry they’ve stifled in their depths.
And maybe some will imagine
that moon in full bloom
and then begin to feel
their own gold moon struggling to rise.
And if they don’t
perhaps they’ll at least enjoy the jest.
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