The Fable of the Good Couple
author’s note:
Narcissus looked into a mirror…
But he never really saw himself.
THE FABLE OF THE GOOD COUPLE
He saw the light in her
and she saw the light in him
and so
they fell in love
then suddenly became monsters
to one another.
Why?
Why did they snarl and snap
when alone together?
The spirits standing behind them knew--
they knew
how that guy always prided himself
on his goodness.
How he loved hearing his goodness praised!
They knew
that gal prided herself
on her goodness too.
How she loved hearing her light praised!
They knew
she now worried
he might outshine her
just as he worried
she might outshine him.
He fell into some dreadful thoughts--
saying to himself:
Just look at her--
she thinks she’s so good.
If people could only see
how she growls at me!
And alas
she raged within
with the same harsh thoughts
about him!
Maybe you’ll be surprised to hear
the spirits had actually put those two together.
You see, they know
the best among us can always be better
and sometimes need catalysts
to help them improve.
They know
a mirror can serve this purpose--
someone who reflects your faults.
But even the best
often don’t not want to see
their faults reflected in a mirror
and may protect themselves from clarity
by stirring up
all sorts of commotion.
Fortunately
exhaustion has a way
of helping us accept the truth:
finally they lacked the energy
to argue more
and slumped to floor
and in that moment of stillness
he looked at her
and she looked at him
and both suddenly realized
how alike they were.
At this point
I can reward your patience
with a happy ending--
but perhaps not the happy ending
you expected.
After achieving that insight
the couple soon understood
their life together
had reached its conclusion:
he no longer needed her
and she no longer needed him.
To this day, she praises him
for how he helped her
become a better person
and in the same glowing way
he lauds her.
Nonetheless, I sometimes detect
of hint of competition
when they check each other
from a distance.
Ah, but maybe that’s for the best:
he needs a bit of motivation
when he feels fatigued in his good fight
just as she does when she
tires in hers.
However
neither ever forgets
what they saw
on the brighter side of that mirror--
he saw as she saw
they share the same light.
33 1/3 New Fables & Myth
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© 2022, Michael R. Patton
Narcissus looked into a mirror…
But he never really saw himself.
THE FABLE OF THE GOOD COUPLE
He saw the light in her
and she saw the light in him
and so
they fell in love
then suddenly became monsters
to one another.
Why?
Why did they snarl and snap
when alone together?
The spirits standing behind them knew--
they knew
how that guy always prided himself
on his goodness.
How he loved hearing his goodness praised!
They knew
that gal prided herself
on her goodness too.
How she loved hearing her light praised!
They knew
she now worried
he might outshine her
just as he worried
she might outshine him.
He fell into some dreadful thoughts--
saying to himself:
Just look at her--
she thinks she’s so good.
If people could only see
how she growls at me!
And alas
she raged within
with the same harsh thoughts
about him!
Maybe you’ll be surprised to hear
the spirits had actually put those two together.
You see, they know
the best among us can always be better
and sometimes need catalysts
to help them improve.
They know
a mirror can serve this purpose--
someone who reflects your faults.
But even the best
often don’t not want to see
their faults reflected in a mirror
and may protect themselves from clarity
by stirring up
all sorts of commotion.
Fortunately
exhaustion has a way
of helping us accept the truth:
finally they lacked the energy
to argue more
and slumped to floor
and in that moment of stillness
he looked at her
and she looked at him
and both suddenly realized
how alike they were.
At this point
I can reward your patience
with a happy ending--
but perhaps not the happy ending
you expected.
After achieving that insight
the couple soon understood
their life together
had reached its conclusion:
he no longer needed her
and she no longer needed him.
To this day, she praises him
for how he helped her
become a better person
and in the same glowing way
he lauds her.
Nonetheless, I sometimes detect
of hint of competition
when they check each other
from a distance.
Ah, but maybe that’s for the best:
he needs a bit of motivation
when he feels fatigued in his good fight
just as she does when she
tires in hers.
However
neither ever forgets
what they saw
on the brighter side of that mirror--
he saw as she saw
they share the same light.
33 1/3 New Fables & Myth
dream steps blog
myth steps blog
you tube channel
© 2022, Michael R. Patton
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